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This was my mom's suggestion:

Floods, ravenous wolves, mermaids, magical siblings...
It is a world where only a few rule, with not only absolute power, but often cruelty as well.
Elijah Hunt and his sisters have been rescued by the Guard from that cruelty, their controlling magical father: the Overseer of Chicago.
Magical powers - illusive until recently - will need to be used to save other children at risk. A member of the Guard is missing.
Now, with the help of his friend, Ivy, the unacknowledged daughter of the Overseer of Portland, it is time to risk it all?

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I love is as is and can't wait to read it!
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It makes me want to read the other books leading up to it!
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Kewl, another revision:

Floods, ravenous wolves, mermaids, magical siblings...
It is a world where only a few rule, with not only absolute power, but often cruelty as well.
Elijah Hunt and his sisters have been rescued from that cruelty; their controlling magical father, the Overseer of Chicago. Their rescuers? A secret organization that calls itself the Guard.
Now Eli and his best friend, Ivy, have joined the elite ranks of the Guard. Their first mission is to find a missing Guard member, Thane. The second? The need to save the kids that Thane had been sent to rescue before he vanished.
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I think I like the new one better
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okay, good getting better is always preferred
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I still like the first one best
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Okay, well I'll make the publisher pick
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